Class 13 - Rosie's Character Description - I could really picture the main character
Class 14 - Great description Alex. Keep up the good work.
Class 13 - Fantastic writing and editing Melissa. Your diary entry was a pleasure to read.
Class 14 -You included feelings and emotive language Beau!
I would give you the job Freddie D. Great formality!
Fantastic informal letter Tyler!
Great use of the modelled writing to inspire your own Daisy!
Fantastic vocabulary choices to create imagery Kosei!
Some lovely use of figurative language Alexa!
You included facts, opinions and feelings Liam. Well done!
You improved your work with editing Maisie well done!
Great use of vocabulary and punctuation throughout recent writing pieces Tilly!
Colby wrote a very informative article all about the life of Jackie Robinson. Well done!
You showed some fantastic progress with the use of a semicolon in your writing Jed!
Your work is always so beautifully presented Sophie.
A great factual account with a persuasive slant James!
Kye created some great imagery with his descriptive writing this week!
Great descriptive vocabulary Zac!
Great use of dialogue in your writing this week Ava!
Great use of formal and informal dialogue Maya.
An exciting Greek myth with dialogue and description.
Great historical diary entry Andie
Your myth was full of action, dialogue and vivid description this week Kerra! Well done!
Unfortunately not the ones with chocolate chips.
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